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Sunshine In Her Smile

Sunshine in her smile
like soft afternoon sun rays
forming a rainbow
in my grey and cloudy sky
after a heavy downpour.

Give me more sunshine
O faraway sunlight girl,
this old fragile heart
now longs for more sunny days,
wake me up from my slumber!



© kash poet
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Placement:1st; (October 2012)

Contest:Tanka Crazy--Sunshine

Sponsor: Leonora Galinta


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Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2012

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Eileen Manassian Date: 3/4/2013 12:08:00 PM Kash, you are gifted! Wow! This just warms my heart. :) Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 10/30/2012 2:43:00 PM This is spectacular, Kashi! The magnetic pull of her sunshine will definately wake u up! Convincing and powerful narrative! :) ps...I read your son's latest posting the other day...he has such maturity in his work...u must be proud! :) gwendolen Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 11:42:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/29/2012 8:33:00 PM Kash..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 10/29/2012 5:28:00 PM Beautiful piece,Wonderful write,Kash..Nice going,friend...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...Keep flying.... Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/29/2012 3:10:00 PM kashi!... you nailed it.. so fab!.. wooohoo.. congrats with huggs!..:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/29/2012 3:01:00 PM Yes, a most deserved first place win, my friend. Congrats to you! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/29/2012 11:23:00 AM CONGRATS KASH ON A PHENOMENAL WRITE AND OUTSTANDING WIN LUV .. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 10/29/2012 10:00:00 AM Big congratulations on you win Kash xx Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/29/2012 8:12:00 AM I hope your Sunny gal does as you ask! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 7:13:00 AM congrats on your great win Kash... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/29/2012 5:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Kas. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 10/29/2012 5:34:00 AM Congratulations Kash for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 10/25/2012 2:47:00 PM awesome tankas Kash, good luck... Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 10/24/2012 9:15:00 AM Good luck for the contest, Kash. you got candy pen I think, all of the words that flow are tempting! :) Login to Reply

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/22/2012 11:01:00 PM Cheer up, my friend and good luck for the contest with such a poignant song!:) Hanitra Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/19/2012 11:13:00 PM hi, Kash, I came here to maybe judge my contest, but it is going to be so difficult!!! See ya when I see ya!! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/19/2012 6:12:00 PM grrreat; you've risen from your slumber, kashi.. i got so busy.... hody, bud!.. drop by!.. fascinating write!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Cindy Cayton Date: 10/19/2012 12:01:00 PM Dearest Kash, This is just beautiful. Your love, caring and passion shows. Sincerest regards, Lucinda Cayton Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 10/19/2012 12:00:00 PM ILTSM! kash, thank you so much for stopping by and reading my poem. Good luck always! love, leonora Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 10/19/2012 11:28:00 AM Kash, this is just great, wonderful image, I love it...David Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/19/2012 11:20:00 AM Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 10/19/2012 9:28:00 AM Hi Kash - The melancholy is stunning. love, Kathy Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/19/2012 2:36:00 AM A GORGEOUS CANVAS OF ROMANTIC WORDS THAT GLOW KASH .. U R SO MASTERFUL AT CHARMING THE EYES OF THE READER LUV .. BEST WISHES .. A SUNNY DELIGHT .. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/18/2012 4:36:00 PM very sweet, with lovely imagery. i love the line "o faraway sunlight girl" - nice! Login to Reply

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