Sunset's Promise

Within the solitude of dusk,
that gentle hush between day and night,
on my porch I sit, to drink in the sunset.
Soothing my parched soul of the day's strife.
Hues on a star chased canvas,
wrap the sky in robes of flowing pink silk.
With my every breath, colors melt,
to slowly dip into the distant ocean.
It's peaceful radiance speaks, as if to say;
"The night will not exist for eternity."
I feel a love envelop and reassure,
that a new sunset awaits me tomorrow.




For the contest:  The Pink Evening Sky
sponsored by Rick Parise
Placement: 8th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Rick's contest "The Pink Evening Sky". Love, Carol
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February 4, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Hi Paula - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Kory (KC)
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February 3, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Freeman Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations Paula on your worthy poem's top ten place. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Very beautiful and uplifting, Paula. Many congrat’s on your big win, Elaine
K. Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 12:57 AM
What a very inspiring take on the contest, Paula-- love how you "drink" in that gorgeous sky-- I feel like doing that sometimes too-- congrats!! -nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations, Paula. I loved this so much the first time I saw it too. I could never have decided how to rate these pink eveing poems if I were the judge. Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 3:23 PM
Many congrats Paula on your fine win in Rick's contest....:)
Mehta Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Paula
Poet Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 4:10 AM
Congrats Paula on your well deserved win in this contest---kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in the Pink Sky contest with this exciting entry my friend... enjoy another chart topping poem with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 8:58 PM
Paula, I am in love with many many of the pink sunset poems I am reading here lately. This is one of them. Awesome!
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January 29, 2011 at 6:23 AM
A beautiful write and wondeful images... Best of luck in contest always Michael
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