Sunset Silence

I used to see them everyday. A pair of doves, very much in love. They flirted, flitted and floated together. Every sunrise and sunset winging and singing together, they were meant to be. That day, the male dove playfully chased his love. And she happily cooed. In front of my eyes, the male dove sat on the wire, while she flew nearby. Next moment, he was electrocuted. As he fell down, she rushed to his side, but there was nothing she could do. Her loving mate was dead. She stood near his body for a long, long time. Noon came and went, then evening fell. The red-orange sun shone brightly before saying goodbye. I watched as she too said hers. Flying back to her nest, she sat unmoving. Silence reigned.

twilight pink sky glows scarlet sol ready to set ~ dove mourns in silence
04.03.2021 For Malabika's "Moments of reflections" contest
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Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 10:47 AM
My heart aches with your words Jo. I pray this moving story isn't true. We have mourning doves. I love to hear their morning coos! Congratulations and blessings to you.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:50 PM
Really tugs the heart, Jo, brilliant write that is read once and repeats in heartbeats evermore. My compliments for your win, Aloha!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Congratulations on your top win. BW ~ Mala
One Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 1:34 PM
I love s poem about silence... So many wonderful lines in your haibun and a wonderful haiku..
Manassian Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Please tell me this isn't true. My heart is broken. Good write otherwise.
Daniel Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 8:01 PM
It's fictional, Eileen, I wrote it for the contest:)
Hankins Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Oh my, how sad. Jo, you have written a poignant, beautiful haibun, certainly worthy of a place among the winners! Best wishes.
J.T. Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Good job; I like this poem -JT
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 6:44 AM
aww this is so sad Jo, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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