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Toweringly tall trees rustle over yonder; all standing at attention black against the tangerine-hued sky. The sun is finally bidding adieu as a tired day is slowly lulling itself to sleep. Submitted for... IMAGIST any form Poetry Contest (Winner: 6th Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date: 12/11/2020 Date written and posted: 05/27/2019

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Date: 12/14/2020 10:37:00 AM
Amazing picture, Edward - so vivid in its contrasts. Love "standing at attention," "tangerine sky," "tired day." You really packed a visual punch into your brief lines. Congratulations on your win! Really like this one.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/14/2020 10:47:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback and congrats, Sam:-) I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 12/14/2020 6:12:00 AM
A beautiful paint!! Congratulations on your placement, Edward!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/14/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thank you very much, Newt:-) God bless.
Date: 12/14/2020 5:09:00 AM
Hi Edward, Stunning imagery! Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/14/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Alexis;-) Most appreciated.
Date: 5/28/2019 4:46:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, enjoyed!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/28/2019 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Tania:-)
Date: 5/27/2019 9:24:00 PM
I never thought of how black the trees get at night, but they surely do. Your imagery is wonderful, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/28/2019 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Caren:-)

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