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Sun's September Rays

sun's october rays unfurl molten golden glow ~ geese flying southbound AP: 3rd place 2022 Posted on May 18, 2020

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Date: 5/29/2020 9:18:00 PM
Preparing well for winter. Best. Mohan
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Date: 5/30/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thanks, Mohan.
Date: 5/25/2020 12:33:00 AM
A great Haiku, Lynn.~Elaine
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Date: 5/30/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine.
Date: 5/24/2020 5:35:00 AM
Your haiku could turn itself into a lovely haibun next!
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Date: 5/24/2020 10:52:00 AM
Yes, absolutely ~ I really like the haibun form.
Date: 5/18/2020 8:43:00 PM
very nice Miss Line
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Date: 5/24/2020 10:52:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy.
Date: 5/18/2020 7:57:00 PM
Lovely, friend. Bless you and love to you, Gina
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:43:00 PM
Much appreciated, Gina. Take care.

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