Sunrise of Love

Fiery orb descends Brilliant colors in its wake ~ Fanning flames of love

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John Kristopher Mathis

Date: 8/14/2019 2:15:00 AM

I love to see how different individuals use haiku. You’ve captivated me more with 17 syllables than most have done with entire books!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:44:00 PM

Wow, Thanks! I was only going for a 'snapshot,' truth be told. Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/13/2019 11:05:00 PM

Whoa! Hold the horses here. This haiku does the tango!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:43:00 PM

It takes two to tango, they say. LOL. Thanks, Caren

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/13/2019 6:47:00 PM

Oh, the scarlet sighs of romantic skies.. what a beautiful image your haiku paints upon my imagination, Gershon. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 8:57:00 PM

Thank you for telling me of your flight of imagination, my friend. So happy to read your encouraging comment. Best always, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/13/2019 4:00:00 PM

I see swirling reds and oranges laced with violet - bravo, gw!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 5:58:00 PM

Ooooh! Thank you, Michelle! :) gw