Sunrise Haiku

-O- electric orange clouds turn and roll with morning warmth - the silent dawn wakes.. ____ P.D. Contest

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Date: 11/18/2011 3:56:00 PM

Congrats Rick on another grand win my friend. with a Haiku of creative perfection luv...

Date: 11/18/2011 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Rick. Love, Carol

Date: 11/18/2011 8:25:00 AM

Looks like we both got hung up on orange. Congratulations Rick

Date: 11/18/2011 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, Rick

Date: 11/18/2011 2:33:00 AM

RICK, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Date: 11/14/2011 1:11:00 PM

Awesome image of the "electric orange clouds" making way for day, Rick. PD will love your entry! Winning wishes headed your way. Love, carolyn

Date: 11/11/2011 6:02:00 PM

Thumbs up, Rick. I especially like last line. I love it when someone turns a phrase inside out. Cheers and good weekend, Cyndi

Date: 11/11/2011 3:30:00 PM

very beautiful scene. I think I have seen this sunrise. good luck in the contest