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dawn's temptress sighs in orange pink disguise awaken friends - arise John G. Lawless ©1/26/2022

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Date: 1/26/2022 2:54:00 PM
Nicely done, John - the dawn as temptress!
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Date: 1/26/2022 10:48:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Eileen. My neighbor texted me a "Sunrise Alert" message this morning and after looking at it ..... well you know what a solemn sunrise can do to the muse.
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Date: 1/26/2022 10:18:00 AM
Lovely imagery. I particulary like dawns temptress analogy. You done something unsual with the haiku and given it rhyme.
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Date: 1/26/2022 10:48:00 AM
OOPS...I put my reply in as a comment

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