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Sunlight In the Glen: Collaboration Poem By Jan Allison and Mel Merrill

Dappled sunlight dancing among the trees in the wooded glen Lingering amongst the wood where it has ancient been She dances fast, and sometimes slow, the tempo ever changing. Gentle breeze she stirs the trees; the mood is scintillating The crystal clear water sparkles with a silvery light Like diamonds splayed on velvet, or a starry, starry night Shafts of sunlight fall on the crumbling old stone wall Shedding light on these, the wall and trees, near brook and waterfall Nature's beauty, boundless, in this timeless timid wood We walk the paths so often trod where ancient feet have stood Each scattered ray comes out to play in primordial den How privileged I, that I could spy, this sunlight in the glen 26th April 2014 Jan Allison and Mel Merrill Its been a true privilege working with Mel on this poem

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Date: 4/28/2014 10:04:00 AM
very gentle romantic stroll and a delight to read , I know Mel will have enjoyed every step you took.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Darren. Hugs Jan x
Date: 4/27/2014 8:52:00 PM
Right,that's it. Me and my dog off for a lovely walk in the woods. xxx What an absolutely blissful image you both have put in my mind,a total pleasure to read, great write my buddy.. xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2014 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Jenny for your lovely comments. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/27/2014 1:16:00 PM
Great piece Jan and Mel how i loved the glens at home the undulating ground and the fallen tree trunks covered in moss and that damp earthy smell and the slivers of sunlight filtering through the canopy above. Great Write Andy
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2014 2:04:00 PM
Thanks Andy I have collaborated on about 5 poems now and write as often as I can with Darren Watson under the name JaDazzle. Hugs Jan
Date: 4/27/2014 8:30:00 AM
Brilliantly charming write you two! As I age, it's more and more difficult to go on long walks but I used to enjoy the smells and sounds of nature! Love ya sis XOXOXOX
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2014 9:10:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comments Jack am so privileged to work with you lovely guys especially my lovely cyber brother Jack xxx
Date: 4/26/2014 3:44:00 PM
Very well done you two! Looks my Mel is getting his fingerprints all over the place lol, You guys did awesome. :) hugs xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2014 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Casarah I am honoured to have worked with Mel. hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/26/2014 1:39:00 PM
Excellent job you two....after reading this I long to go for a walk in the woods. Hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2014 1:42:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Cecilia was fun collaborating with such an awesome poet as Mel - I am very fortunate he asked me and have learned a lot from him. Hugs Jan x

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