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I tear myself away my tears wash away the pain I'm torn in two watered down devilishly drowned

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Date: 12/7/2023 2:56:00 PM
oh, that sinking feeling of being torn in two...been there quite often...but like you said, tears wash away the pain. Lovely poem, Di11y. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 12/9/2023 8:00:00 AM
I was just working through funny words associations and this poem came from it and I quite liked it. Glad you liked it too, thanks for your comment x

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