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Sundown

Whispering leaves, summer breeze,
A time to postpone all destinies.
In crimson gown, she's on the town,
'Til the dark eyes go slowly down.

Leaving memories of the golden hours,
Laughing children in leafy bowers;
The sunny noon, with the robin's tune,
And the feverish blossoms aswoon!

But, a time comes for the surrender,
When there's nothing more to render;
And where the bluebirds I have known?
It's fate sometimes to stand alone.

In the languid, violet, creeping chill,
Night embraced before, embraces still.
Palest moon, when the stars are out,
Peace is what these moments are about!

As the ghost of day goes his weary way,
To return again through another doorway.
But, for now, he just bids his goodbye,
To the glowing, lovely ruby of the sky!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 1:59 PM
Gorgeous imagery and color. The brilliance of your writes dazzles. A FAVE for me, Evelyn. Bravo! :) Gershon
Buehler Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 5:53 PM
I am gratified that this poem is a FAVE for you, Gershon. Thank you for the happy thoughts. :) Evelyn
DiMino Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 11:06 PM
Wow! Such a great ending: "But, for now, he just bids his goodbye, To the glowing, lovely ruby of the sky!" Love it. Wonderful imagery. Great little poem.
Buehler Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 11:37 PM
Thank you, Joe. I'm delighted that you found pleasure in this verse. :)
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