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Sunday Morning in the Deep Green Woods

Sunday morning in the deep green woods. Shoulds and should nots don’t stir my soul. I could touch the church with my foot. I could stretch my thighs and shins then shout. Waking up rather late, not late, but later, my coffee just out the gate. I stumble into my recliner and read an unknown poet to me. To others, I could be that utterly. Hot on the trail of neither shoulds or should nots - to write another poem on the spot with stains on my cup, on my soul, or be so bold as to go to church, raise the roof, hug the necks - oh yes so bold as to love God and one another, to live those two commandments, to reach heaven, no it’s not too late. I’m out the gate. Communion on my plate - remembrance of the life Christ lived. Should not need a bag of nails and a hammer to work up eternity’s sweat. Nonetheless, I’ll follow my Lord to the moon and back. Which moon you ask? Now isn’t that the point? The Son of Man owns it all, and I hear the stir of waters as the blinding light illuminates it all, and guess what, I can see in transcending primaries, but also in the not-seen-before, and so why do I go to church? I stretch my hands to Abba (Daddy) for all its worth - the provider of all that prevails. Sunday morning in the deep green woods. Shoulds and should nots don’t stir my soul.

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Date: 7/2/2024 9:23:00 PM
Church is a place where God resides. It needn't be a colossal structure. It can be anywhere where goodness resides. It can be the woods even. What is important is that our heart and mind should be raised to Abba.. our Father, the great Creator of the universe and everything in it. Beautiful and profound.
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Date: 7/1/2024 6:59:00 AM
Thanks for this dedication. The woods is one of God's greatest churches. I enjoyed reading a poem with a spiritual voice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2024 8:11:00 AM
I appreciate you, Hilda!
Date: 6/30/2024 6:50:00 PM
Excellent poem . I love it :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2024 7:20:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 6/30/2024 2:35:00 PM
Thought provoking. It me it's not a question Church, Yes. If my Dad were there would I be there. I have two dad's ones alive and the other is dead.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2024 7:21:00 PM
Sorry for your loss. My mom’s been gone 3 years.
Date: 6/30/2024 1:39:00 PM
Sounds like a busy but relaxing and spiritual Sunday.. Explained in great detail..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2024 7:22:00 PM
Oh my that was just the start of an action packed day…lol. Got home a few minutes ago. Hugs :)
Date: 6/30/2024 6:12:00 AM
Cool twist on following the true path and the Leader of a new world to come. To the moon and beyond!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2024 7:22:00 PM
Thanks, Tom!

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