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Sunday it is the grey light of waiting snow that greets my sleep worn eyes. tiny snow buds gathered like the giggles of many children who long for Christmas morning.

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Date: 10/18/2017 12:40:00 AM
Nice, We are having 30 degree days here and loving the warm. A few laughs too I might add. Nice to read your poem Patricia. Sorry I havn't been around much, busy time of the year. Thank you for all your kindness with my poetry. Kind regards, Craig
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/18/2017 9:23:00 AM
You are a good poet and story teller I love to read your work. Thank you for coming north to read mine. I write with a pen carved from an icicle that formed at Valhalla's door.
Date: 10/17/2017 8:14:00 PM
I'm allergic to snow, but addicted to giggles so I'll give you a pass;-) Besides, what's the north country without some white stuff? V2 is stellar, IMHO. ~ john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/17/2017 8:28:00 PM
We haven't had any giggles yet but I will let you know as soon as we doe. will send down to you post haste Thank you from your fan club.
Date: 10/16/2017 10:41:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Patricia... though I normally prefer not to think of snow prior to December. Undeniably delightful.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/16/2017 11:06:00 PM
Don't think of it as snow but as giggles of children waiting for Christmas. Thank you.
Date: 10/16/2017 9:49:00 PM
Darling pen :) love "gathered like giggles" xomo!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/17/2017 2:30:00 PM
Can't complain, no one listens anyway lol, neither do I. Busy writing and transcribing cleaning people on to do bog Fall clean up outside and in. Noisey but it will be back to quiet soon. Joey hates the disruption to his routine but gets plenty of scitches and tickles so that makes up for the noise. Got to go now take care. Talk soon.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/16/2017 10:18:00 PM
Doing considerably better :) been at it for over a week but believe have at last conquered mine enemy, fingers crossed. (not PMS the other thing lol) and you lovely?
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/16/2017 10:09:00 PM
Thank you my dearie. How are you?

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