Sunburnt... **peeling***

I see the waves face each other in anger of falling tears Then they collide into one another to fight But end up making love in the peace sun Why cant i make peace in the sun? Why cant i forgive the forgotten? Why cant i forget the forgiven? The hardest thing in my life is to shed my tears infront of all And yet here i am not caring Shedding them out Its like a puddle of what i thought is my own blood But my blood still floods my insides Its my heart im shedding Is this forgetting the forgiven? But i place my hand on my cheecks The back of it used as a tissue And i look at my hands and see it peeled Am i forgiving the forgotten? (I dunno wheather i should enter this into sheeding your skin contest.I need at some enthusiasm.Let me know if i shouldn't or mawb change it or just keep it this way and enter it.Thanx to all=) )