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Sunbeam

Dainty feet on the cold wooden floor , I shuffle across the boards quietly , wrapped in our sheet , The pups nails tinkering next to me . He knows who im looking for . Down the hallway, Past our framed faces and memories. I smell coffee . I squint ; stepping into the sunlight That floods our kitchen. And there he is , like every morning . Nose in a book, mug of coffee steaming Next to him. He smiles and slowly closes his book , grabbing the front of the sheet and pulling me into his lap. " you're a vision in white ".

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Date: 4/28/2019 9:57:00 PM
Ah! I Love it..especially the lovely ending.. & most Welcome to poetrysoup..!
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Neha Khurana
Date: 4/29/2019 3:49:00 AM
Glad you liked it sakshi! Thank you so much :)
Date: 3/1/2018 6:54:00 AM
Great first post Neha, welcome to poetry soup.. This is not a sonnet though, you can change it to free verse if you wish..
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Neha Khurana
Date: 3/1/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you silent one :) ok i ll see and reupdate :)
Date: 3/1/2018 6:41:00 AM
Oh, you have explained the scene really nicely,It was a really beautiful written poem nd n enjoyable one to read especially the last 5 lines, welcome to poetrysoup, I m sure that you ll love your long stay here, good luck and continue to write
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Neha Khurana
Date: 3/1/2018 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for your appreciation faraz, hope to improve my work in future :)

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