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Sunbathing Sundress

Her skin reflected the Sun her eyes were blue like the sea she was sunbathing on beach how I loved her eyes! Never did she like tan lines so have a guess of her dress salty breeze playing with curves her lips licked sundrops! A nice sunbathing sundress with Sun rays all over her wish I were lucky rays to kiss her birthday dress! © kashinath karmakar ==================== Placement:10th (April 2011) By:kashinath karmakar (1st April 2011) Contest:The Sundress Sponsor:~Constance La France~

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James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2011 11:52:00 AM

Having read it a few more times Kashinath, it just got better and better. Many thanks for reading my poetry and your always kind comments....:)

James Fraser

Date: 4/9/2011 6:09:00 AM

Congratulation's on your fine win Kashinath in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/5/2011 7:00:00 PM

Brilliant, and a worthy winner, love to hve been the salty breeze. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2011 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations to you, Kash. I am seeing you won although I do not know which place yet. Just glad you made the list! I am trying to get thru lots of comments I could not answer yesterday!! Let me check out your newest poem.

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/4/2011 1:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your deserving win in Constance's "The Sundress" Contest, Kashinath! Always, Annalise

Jack Horne

Date: 4/4/2011 10:49:00 AM

Congrats on all your wins : ) Jack

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2011 9:52:00 AM

Kash, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 6:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2011 11:51:00 PM

you have the ooomph, kashi...best CNGRATS for this stunning win! :) huggs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/3/2011 8:59:00 PM

An awesome write and wish. Big Congratulations.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/3/2011 6:59:00 PM

Coming back to this sundress of yours, Kashinath! Still enjoyed the uniqueness of your take on the challenge :) Congrats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2011 6:25:00 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of constance, kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:08:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath my friend on your wonderful winning poem in the sundress contest luv.. an awesome write and creative poem .. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/3/2011 4:23:00 PM

Oh...I do love that last line!! a kiss of sun!! Congratulations, Kashinath!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 1:14:00 PM

Absolutely stunning approach Kash, really enjoyed this one.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2011 10:09:00 PM

Kashinath, this is the best kind of sundress ever, and it's wonderful to find a secluded spot on a lake to wear one like this! I really enjoyed your unique and clever approach to this contest and would like to thank you for reading several of my poems today. I am using my husband's laptop and am so happy to be able to see some poetry tonight. You are a good friend!

Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2011 6:34:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/1/2011 4:43:00 PM

oh sounds naughty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 1:52:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Very creative and descriptive..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winning one to me....Thanks for stopping by and faithfully commenting on my work..Sara

James Foulk

Date: 4/1/2011 12:51:00 PM

this was a great poem you wrote, very creative. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comment

James Fraser

Date: 4/1/2011 11:58:00 AM

Love it Kashinath. A very creative take on the image for Constance's contest, good luck. Have a wonderful weekend.....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 9:55:00 AM

Delightfully original and wonderfully descriptive poem on the "sundress," Kash. This is quite a novel approach and I wish you success in Constance's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/1/2011 8:37:00 AM

What a different take on "sundress", imagine that clothed by sun rays-- very sensual -- wish you the best in the contest, Kashinath! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 6:38:00 AM

Naughty but nice ..cute as sugar and spice Kashinath.. wonderful words expressing the true emotion as u view the sundress on a special lady luv... good luck in Constance's cool contest.. with this masterful write..happy weekend my friend with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 5:59:00 AM

naughty and subtlely sensual, kshi.. whoooo! :) huggs