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Sunbathing Sundress

Her skin reflected the Sun
her eyes were blue like the sea
she was sunbathing on beach
how I loved her eyes!

Never did she like tan lines
so have a guess of her dress
salty breeze playing with curves
her lips licked sundrops!

A nice sunbathing sundress
with Sun rays all over her
wish I were lucky rays to
kiss her birthday dress!



© kashinath karmakar
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Placement:10th (April 2011)

By:kashinath karmakar (1st April 2011)

Contest:The Sundress

Sponsor:~Constance La France~

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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James Fraser Date: 5/16/2011 11:52:00 AM Having read it a few more times Kashinath, it just got better and better. Many thanks for reading my poetry and your always kind comments....:) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 4/9/2011 6:09:00 AM Congratulation's on your fine win Kashinath in Constance's wonderful contest....:) Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/5/2011 7:00:00 PM Brilliant, and a worthy winner, love to hve been the salty breeze. Harry Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/4/2011 9:43:00 PM Congratulations to you, Kash. I am seeing you won although I do not know which place yet. Just glad you made the list! I am trying to get thru lots of comments I could not answer yesterday!! Let me check out your newest poem. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/4/2011 1:48:00 PM Congratulations on your deserving win in Constance's "The Sundress" Contest, Kashinath! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/4/2011 10:49:00 AM Congrats on all your wins : ) Jack Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/4/2011 9:52:00 AM Kash, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/4/2011 6:50:00 AM Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/3/2011 11:51:00 PM you have the ooomph, kashi...best CNGRATS for this stunning win! :) huggs Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/3/2011 8:59:00 PM An awesome write and wish. Big Congratulations. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/3/2011 6:59:00 PM Coming back to this sundress of yours, Kashinath! Still enjoyed the uniqueness of your take on the challenge :) Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/3/2011 6:25:00 PM Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of constance, kashinath Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/3/2011 6:08:00 PM Congrats Kashinath my friend on your wonderful winning poem in the sundress contest luv.. an awesome write and creative poem .. enjoy your top ten victory with luv.. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 4/3/2011 4:23:00 PM Oh...I do love that last line!! a kiss of sun!! Congratulations, Kashinath!! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/2/2011 1:14:00 PM Absolutely stunning approach Kash, really enjoyed this one.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/1/2011 10:09:00 PM Kashinath, this is the best kind of sundress ever, and it's wonderful to find a secluded spot on a lake to wear one like this! I really enjoyed your unique and clever approach to this contest and would like to thank you for reading several of my poems today. I am using my husband's laptop and am so happy to be able to see some poetry tonight. You are a good friend! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/1/2011 6:34:00 PM Thank you for supporting my contest. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 4/1/2011 4:43:00 PM oh sounds naughty Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/1/2011 1:52:00 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Very creative and descriptive..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winning one to me....Thanks for stopping by and faithfully commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/1/2011 12:51:00 PM this was a great poem you wrote, very creative. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comment Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 4/1/2011 11:58:00 AM Love it Kashinath. A very creative take on the image for Constance's contest, good luck. Have a wonderful weekend.....:) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/1/2011 9:55:00 AM Delightfully original and wonderfully descriptive poem on the "sundress," Kash. This is quite a novel approach and I wish you success in Constance's contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/1/2011 8:37:00 AM What a different take on "sundress", imagine that clothed by sun rays-- very sensual -- wish you the best in the contest, Kashinath! :) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/1/2011 6:38:00 AM Naughty but nice ..cute as sugar and spice Kashinath.. wonderful words expressing the true emotion as u view the sundress on a special lady luv... good luck in Constance's cool contest.. with this masterful write..happy weekend my friend with luv.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/1/2011 5:59:00 AM naughty and subtlely sensual, kshi.. whoooo! :) huggs Login to Reply

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