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Sun Dance Premiere Contest Winner

My husband and I were newly wed and cash poor. It was Easter weekend and the weather unusually fine for the time of year. Both loving the outdoors, we decided to cycle, circumnavigating our county over three nights. We traversed hill and dale, intoxicated by the beauty of the landscape. But late on the Saturday evening, just as Joseph and Mary had found on Christmas eve, every lodging was booked out for the festival. Locals eventually directed us to the abode of two elderly sisters, long retired from running a boarding house. As darkness was falling, they took us in. So weary was I, the bed felt as soft as eiderdown. A blessed sleep descended immediately. Before retiring, the sisters mentioned they would both be up at dawn, as always on Easter Sunday, to watch the sun dance with joy to see Our Lord rise again. rising with the sun those wishing to see it dance on easter morn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/20/2021 6:31:00 AM
Very descriptive and quietly draws one into the scenes to witness a witness about our Savior, Jesus. Congrats on your name being on the winners' list. Sara
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/3/2021 3:11:00 AM
Sorry to miss this message Sara. I think I turned off the link to my email by mistake. Rarely here now since my muse left me. Thank you so much for the placement.
Date: 8/22/2017 8:54:00 AM
I see you have risen to the occasion splendidly, Congratulations on FIRST PLACE
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/22/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Donna. A special treat for me.
Date: 8/11/2017 4:01:00 AM
- Congratulations, Jean !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/11/2017 6:18:00 AM
Hi Sunshine! When I see your face I smile.
Date: 8/4/2017 11:10:00 AM
I am so happy to see you got first place with this heartwarming haibun Jean. Big Congratulations on your well deserved placement! : )
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/4/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie. I am more used to looking for my name at the other end of placement lists. This means a lot to me.
Date: 8/2/2017 6:16:00 PM
This is so lovely , Jean, I love the Haiku attached ... Congratulations on your wonderful win well deserved... ~*
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/3/2017 1:06:00 AM
Thank you Eve. It is wonderful for me to reach first place. I am delighted.
Date: 8/2/2017 3:47:00 PM
Lovely! I see why you won! Congrats!!!
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/2/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 8/2/2017 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful seasonal poem Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/2/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Cecelia. I can't remember my last number one.
Date: 7/31/2017 4:19:00 PM
Great storytelling Jean..
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/31/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 7/31/2017 1:11:00 PM
A great story Jean. Enjoyed this haibun! -- Dean
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/31/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thanks for your visit Dean.
Date: 7/31/2017 12:25:00 PM
- You have written a glorious poem, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/31/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine
Date: 7/31/2017 11:04:00 AM
Oooh... I forgot to tell you I'm a closet haibun fan. Very munchy, this one. A very loverly dance indeed. Thanks for sharing ~ john
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/31/2017 11:09:00 AM
Come out of the closet you old rogue! Let's be having some haibun.
Date: 7/31/2017 9:12:00 AM
What a lovely story, Jean. Money doesn't make us happy, and the two of you were blessed with happiness just being together and witnessing so much of God's beauty in the countryside. Very nicely written.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/31/2017 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Lin. I'm not good with prose but it's a story I can't forget because of the strong Catholic faith they possessed.

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