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Sun Dance

~Sun Dancing~         

Bright yellow sparks glisten around the landscape
Sheer environment expose  
Warmth slinks down every step        
So--  Invigorating 
Spur like rays muster in long light
The wolves wait to howl
Soon--Bunch of flowers 
Huddle in with sunlit love
Luminous rave  

By; pd

(For contest) 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 1/11/2017 3:49:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing this one again. All the poems I read here must number nearly a million and of course I cannot remember them. So it was like reading it brand new. Yes, I get what you said to me. But it's the same all over, PD. There are very few "real" people out there! Be glad to be YOU, a unique and dynamic inspiring poet! Hope you don't ever leave for good!!
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Date: 10/4/2016 11:49:00 PM
Marvelous pd, marvelous /|\
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:31:00 AM
Very deep & meaningful. Sun dance is well fabricated with few lines. I enjoyed every line. A7 from me.........// hugs
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Date: 10/29/2015 7:46:00 PM
Such warmth in this write, Linda. You have such a unique way of grouping words to form poetic lines! I am there, in the minute of the hour you described. Everything at a standstill...poetry. PS. Go and check Armand's latest write for you. I would have wanted to comment, but deemed it best to give both of you the pleasure of the first acknowledgment. I do hope you are alright. Big hugs and prayers for you!
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Date: 4/6/2015 8:09:00 PM
I sit back and watch with the wolves....getting ready to howl : )
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Date: 3/19/2015 1:51:00 PM
Love your words!
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:30:00 AM
This one is quite descriptive and so heart warming to read, Linda. And amongst all this beauty the wolves wait to howl. Well done, my friend. Loved it.... Robert.
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:12:00 AM
I don't know how replying here works;), I might not comment at all, but I decided to read your poems (also I'm open to recommendations of yours) - you are accurate and rich with words, I would love to have you as my translator;} Also, thank you for commenting on my work;)
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Date: 6/10/2014 12:18:00 AM
Rays muster in long light? How'd you think of that? Sweet write my friend. Hope all is awesome in your poetic universe--and you are the xoolest :)
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:15:00 AM
Hi Linda, There are not enough praises that I can think of to convey the beauty in this masterpiece. It's a privilege to read share and comment on your writes. Thank you for sharing this poem with us here. Thanks for your visits and your kindness, as well. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/9/2014 12:52:00 AM
Hi Linda. I've been reading some of your writes, trying to figure you out. Haven't yet, but I do luv this poem. Drawn to it, strangely. I wouldn't trade your poems for all the rubies in the world; they're gems
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Date: 4/13/2014 3:32:00 AM
Nice one - dancing away, best wishes, Bhavna
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Date: 4/11/2014 7:55:00 PM
What a beautiful poem!! Warmed me right up!! Awesome prose!!
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Date: 4/9/2014 6:33:00 AM
Great poem pd:]
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Date: 4/8/2014 12:12:00 PM
So beautiful.
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Date: 3/28/2014 5:28:00 PM
Sounds Like Angels Swirling About Her Forest Fire Immune To These Flames Yet Not, Their Embers Of Love....I Love 'Sunlit Love' And Your Brilliance's Title Is Wonderful!...'Flowers Luminous Expose, Their Wolves Wait, To Howl:' Wow, Your Brush Is Astonishing! I Am Going To Favour This, Picturesque In Beautiful's Poetic Dance...Love, Jeremy
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Date: 3/28/2014 2:32:00 PM
Well done my friend, love the thought of the sun and warmer weather, i'm also you enjoyed my write on Pennhurst i'm not going their either writting about it was bad enough my good friend, i just went with the haunting angle, but i think it worked. cheri so were agreed we both are not going their hehe back at you. linda
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Date: 3/12/2014 9:11:00 AM
Wonderful words scented with beauty. Masterpiece!!!! ^_^
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Date: 2/23/2014 5:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem...the type that always appeals to me. The 3rd line is so striking, evoking a feeling of slow motion. Must read more of your poems.
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Date: 2/22/2014 8:15:00 AM
I can only dream of sunlight like that. #lotsofsnow beautiful poem and extremely well written!
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Date: 2/18/2014 8:17:00 PM
I love this poem.
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Date: 2/15/2014 3:41:00 PM
This is such a gorgeous piece PD.... so wonderfully written and just a beautiful expression... loved it !!
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Date: 2/15/2014 8:41:00 AM
love the sun on water as it plays with the ripples. Great piece.. like the warmth slinks down every step. Good work Andy lyle
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:07:00 PM
Poignant imagery...beautiful Linda//Sinclair
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Date: 2/11/2014 9:48:00 PM
PD, I never commented to this one earlier because I was thinking it was for my contest, but it never appeared in my contest! Did you know that? it is a nice poem. Thanks for supporting the contest. Soupmail.
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