Home » Poems » L Milton Hankins » Sun and Sand Minichu

Sun and Sand Minichu

Midwinter get-away Leisurely drive to sunny Key West, Florida Fun each day. White sandy coast Searching for conch shells and good times Beach roast Sunburn Unfortunate Learn Beware the pesky fleas Return home highly recommend Please! HONORABLE MENTION Written January 14, 2021 For Sun and Sand Minichu Contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2021 2:10:00 PM

Whoa!! Sunburn and fleas. Don't know if I would want any of that. Congrats on your winner. Sara

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/5/2021 8:00:00 PM

Sand fleas, Sara, are familiar on all southern beaches. Thanks so much for your visit and your comment.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/3/2021 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Let's sail away to Key West. Also welcome new lifetime member. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.............

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/3/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Paula.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 7:09:00 AM

Hi LM. I like the picture you painted with this. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/3/2021 9:44:00 AM

Thanks, Linda.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:43:00 AM

L MILTON, Thanks for participating in my contest. All good with your Minichu except the alignment of rhymes of middle lines of the stanzas. Still, congrats for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/3/2021 9:44:00 AM

Not sure specifically what you are referring to, because I tried my hardest to follow the rules. Guess I missed something. I'll try again.