Sun and Sand Minichu

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Lovin' hot sun and sand! In summertime with a golden beach so handy- Waves are grand! Cool waters churn- Frothy waves like cotton candy Return. Hi-Five! Looking dandy- Dive! Lovin' hot sun and sand- Frothy waves like cotton candy! Dive! January 9, 2021 Contest: Sun and Sand Minichu Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2021 2:17:00 PM

Does look like fun. Way to go for the contest. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 7:12:00 AM

Love the waves like cotton candy Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:24:00 AM

Sandra, thanx for participating in my contest and contrasting the hot beach sand and cool waters of the sea beautifully through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2021 3:23:00 PM

Great imagery and flow, Sandra. I didn't find this to be an easy form. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 1/9/2021 3:49:00 PM

Such lovely imagery and rhyme, i especially like 'Frothy waves like cotton candy' good luck in the contest Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx