Sun

Sun The sun rose and set. I kept looking at the piece of fire I saw in my childhood. In my current age,I moved the sun with mysterious powers. And by positioning the sun well, I strengthened the good life.

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David Smith

Date: 4/21/2024 11:47:00 AM

A nice dream. Who knows what powers we have and not yet learned to master. I know we all have gifts to share and leave for next generation. Your poetry is one such gift and choosing the soup was a wise choice. Best regards David in NZ PS I am seventy and looking forward the birth of Identical twin boys to our eldest daughter. We have one grandson to our other daughter. We have one son our youngest.