Sun-Moon

millions of stars are similar to our sun - - teeming universe a hairy werewolf stands howling at the full moon - - silver bullets fly a new made vampire drinks blood under the moonlight - - ashes at sunrise Jack Horne for Linda-Marie's haiku contest

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Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 5:07:00 AM

Jack, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 2/2/2012 2:29:00 AM

Nice one congrats on your win.....spandan

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 2:20:00 PM

I really enjoyed this set of haiku, Jack. You were very imaginative. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

David Williams

Date: 1/31/2012 1:04:00 AM

Jack congrats on your win, keep out of fire of those bullets my friend..David

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 8:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem, loved and enjoyed, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:58:00 PM

Congratulations on this supernatural take on the topic, Jack. It is very interesting.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:25:00 PM

congrats Jack on success in my contest.. an extraordinary entry luv.. thankxxx...

M.I.A .

Date: 1/26/2012 7:50:00 PM

sun moon... beautiful, love your first stanza. good luck on the contest Jack

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/24/2012 12:16:00 PM

Jack I haven't been here in a while I really enjoyed your set of haiku especially the last one :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/24/2012 6:31:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Jack. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2012 12:03:00 AM

I wanted to tell you I am having computer problems so please don't think I am ignoring you if I don't see as many poems of yours this week!! I really like reading your work!

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/23/2012 4:16:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Jack, this looks like a winner to me, best wishes. Elizabeth

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/23/2012 8:37:00 AM

Wonderful imagination, loved and give you best wishes for the contest, bl

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/23/2012 2:05:00 AM

this is a stunner jack- all the very best in the contest, brenda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/22/2012 12:35:00 PM

Oooh, very spooky, Jack. Very nice the way you set the stage in your first verse and then went on to describe the effects of moonlight on legendary creatures. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/21/2012 11:00:00 PM

Like in my dreams Jack.. everthing is a team..even in my bad ones.. i like the vampire one..lol... like in 30 days of night... watching the rising sun as he turns to ashes... good luck in the contest.. thank you for sharing..forever & ever~pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2012 8:28:00 PM

thankxx for supporting my contest Jack.. good luck luv.. know I will be amazed once again..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2012 5:15:00 PM

oh, boy , everyone is going so fast filling up this contest and I fear I can't think one up by midnight! I really enjoyed this set.You ended up with supernatural the last two!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2012 5:01:00 PM

Reads like a winning work..Good luck in Linda's contest..I especially like the first one..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2012 2:40:00 PM

You will do well in the contest Jack! You have put together the beautiful sun and the cool moon! I really liked how you put both a werewolf and a vampire successfully into the same poem of Haiku nonetheless!! They work real well too, Great Work!!

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/21/2012 2:01:00 PM

Good one, good luck in contest Jack. Elizabeth