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awaiting breakfast a chilly autumn morning sun-lit horse whiskers

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Date: 3/16/2024 1:51:00 PM
Well done and with a great picture to boot. It creates a realistic image in my mind. I did a little riding at times and it rings true.
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Date: 3/14/2024 9:20:00 PM
Dear Don, I adore horses and autumn. Your haiku captures the morning scene with striking imagery and a sense of anticipation. Simply lovely. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/14/2024 9:43:00 PM
Thank you. Haiku and hoses are special to me as well.
Date: 3/14/2024 4:33:00 AM
Nice one you got some talent sir I would love to be like you
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Date: 3/14/2024 4:42:00 AM
Thank you. Good luck with your poetry!
Date: 3/12/2024 5:59:00 PM
This made me smile.
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/13/2024 6:42:00 AM
We live near a stable. However, not the one where Jesus was born. It's fun watching the horse frolic in the morning air.
Date: 9/9/2018 5:15:00 PM
Hello Don Jannone, this a beautiful .haiku. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/8/2018 12:25:00 PM
Hello. I logged on for a moment and somehow noticed your entry by its title. I adore horses and miss my riding days. I remember the horses behaved best in the cooler weather and air. Your format is in true form voice and tone. Thank you for sharing your entry and theme.
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Date: 9/8/2018 8:53:00 AM
Fabulous imagery, I can feel it, even smell it! (I love the smell of horses) xomo
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