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Tania's fall splendor contest-September 7, 2023

Life is great for a few short months leaves shade us from the sultry heat but at the end of Summer's season they get crushed beneath our feet. But time takes its inescapable toll leaves wither once they take the fall overlooked and simply swept away because they must answer Autumn's call Cruel North winds age them quickly Golden leaves become fringed in rust wrinkled and brittle, tumbling to the ground they lay crushed beneath the earth as dust They're ever granted a burial plot just raked into pyres, and burned in heaps problems for the weekend gardener and for their sad death, no one weeps

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Date: 10/3/2023 10:33:00 AM
Very heart wrenching and plaintive, Mark. A good commentary on life. Thank you for sharing in not only the beauty of fall but in its sadness with a touch of futility. Blessings to you!
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Date: 10/1/2023 10:33:00 AM
I love your take on leaves and their lifespan Mark. Creative! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:02:00 PM
Mark, a wonderful fall poem, love the progression of summer to fall, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/29/2023 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Tania!!
Date: 9/16/2023 1:07:00 AM
What a wonderfully poetic poem this is Mark. Incredibly well written with gorgeous lines, ‘leaves wither once they take the fall’ ‘ golden leaves become fringed with rust’- glorious imagery. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
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Date: 9/29/2023 3:53:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 9/14/2023 3:32:00 PM
It is a cruel fate the leaves must suffer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, Mark, good luck in the contest! Bill
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/15/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Bill.
Date: 9/9/2023 12:49:00 AM
Simply beautiful poetry.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/15/2023 10:42:00 AM
Thank you friend
Date: 9/7/2023 5:03:00 PM
All just another act in nature's colossal play..always another curtain call, another places everyone.....nicely written Mark
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/15/2023 10:41:00 AM
Thanks John.
Date: 9/7/2023 5:00:00 PM
such a vivid descriptive autumnal write, i do like the way you crafted this Mark - at least they have an official cremation at the end. hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/15/2023 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 9/7/2023 4:37:00 PM
I always feel like weeping when leaves begin to fall in Autumn. Their colors are magnificent, but its death, nonetheless.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/15/2023 10:40:00 AM
Thanks for that comment Lin.

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