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Summer To Autumn

Simply slow day Uniquely made for fun Mark the Summer’s way, Manipulating the winds to Even and slow as they Reluctantly slink away. Twilight brings a chill and Opines its continuing will. Alabaster moons Underscore the darkness, Turn stars to balloons. Uniting as one mark, Melding and moving, Nature proudly approving.

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Date: 9/23/2023 6:44:00 AM
Much enjoyed the walk through seasons. Lovely images throughout--beautiful poem, Linda!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/23/2023 6:49:00 AM
It's such a pleasure to have you visit Vijay. Many thanks for your continued support and encouragement. :)
Date: 9/22/2023 9:46:00 PM
The change from summer to autumn is beautifully captured. From summer's warmth, twilight brings a chill ! This is the most obvious sign of the arrival of autumn ! Enjoyed your poem dear Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/23/2023 6:35:00 AM
I haven't felt the chill in Texas for a long time Valsa. LOL But I'm hopeful it comes soon. Thank you for stopping and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 9/22/2023 2:47:00 PM
Lovely Acrostic poetry, Linda. You covered the changes from summer to autumn well. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Bill. Always smiles :)
Date: 9/22/2023 7:58:00 AM
My favorite line...Turning stars to balloons...love the form and imagery.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 8:03:00 AM
Nice to see you here Karen. Many thanks for the input and very kind comments! :)
Date: 9/21/2023 3:58:00 PM
A wonderful poem dear Linda thats very clever and well written. Captures the changing of seasons so beautifully with lovely poetic lines, ‘ Twilight brings a chill’ ‘ Turns stars to balloons’ and I really love the last line. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 8:02:00 AM
Hey Christina dear. Thank you for the lovely supportive words! hugs and smiles! :)
Date: 9/21/2023 8:07:00 AM
A spectacular Acrostic Laf... A lovely read even if it wasn' acrostic. You're amazing. Cheers sv Granddaughter and Co. arriving from America soon. See you in a month or so. Take care.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 8:00:00 AM
Hi Svvie! Batckatcha. Enjoy your fam time - I know you will :) cheers my friend! :)
Date: 9/20/2023 5:22:00 PM
I'm impressed...outstanding acrostic that flows together quite well. You've inspired me. I need to try that form sometime. Anyway, you've truly captured the transition from summer to autumn. Well done.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2023 7:59:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind comments Sara. Yes, try it! :)
Date: 9/20/2023 9:36:00 AM
this is a good acrostic because it reads with natural flow..there's something about your work i really like; it's very delicate and understated :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/20/2023 9:45:00 AM
Hi Charlotte. I am pleased and honored for you to like my work. I am encouraging by your words...think I'll post something else soon ;);) Thank you! :)
Date: 9/20/2023 9:31:00 AM
Woah, so many amazing and creative lines here that I love so much "twilight brings a chill", "alabaster moon", "turn stars to balloons" Wow, so breathtaking and wonderful! Nature proudly approving.. Definitely! Enjoyed reading this! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/20/2023 9:42:00 AM
Many, many thanks for your enthusiastic and supportive remarks Hiya! Thanks you! :)

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