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Summer Tanka

sunset witnesses the dive the summer sky listens for the splash! --- 5/15/16

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Date: 5/21/2016 3:19:00 PM

Excellent Tanka, Joseph. Congratulations on your nice placement. Sandra

Date: 5/21/2016 12:03:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 5/21/2016 9:16:00 AM

Excellent and creative, Joseph! In a diving competition this would have received ten out of ten!! Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Date: 5/21/2016 12:16:00 AM

Well done! :)

Date: 5/20/2016 9:43:00 PM

Lovely! Congratulations p!

Date: 5/20/2016 9:39:00 PM

This is cute. Congrats on your placement!

Date: 5/20/2016 8:54:00 PM

This is a favorite entry in Andrea's contest Joseph! Congratulations on your top honor! #7 ; )

Date: 5/20/2016 7:46:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph, well deserved honors...

Date: 5/20/2016 7:19:00 PM

I don't know what it is about this one, but it tickled me. It was just so dang CUTE.Congrats for your win, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 5/20/2016 7:40:00 PM

It was a great contest Andrea...Thank you for my placement..hugs

Date: 5/15/2016 9:33:00 PM

Joseph, very nice, I am loving this 7 , mine is similar

Date: 5/15/2016 2:03:00 PM

As a kid I was always swimming during the summer. Swimming is a part of summer just like baseball and cookouts are! Great write!

Date: 5/15/2016 12:54:00 PM

- Sounds delicious .... with a "splash" on a hot summer day, Joseph - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)