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Summer Swallow

SUMMER SWALLOW
The scene of spring floats for a while in the air for summer to see the last hues of flowers, for under the blazing sky they’d soon wither as the scorching mid-day sun sucks dawn’s colors. Rustle of dry leaves of parched trees has begun, in their cool shadow on the lake swims a swan. I scan smoky sky, call clouds to come again, a swallow of summer I wait for the rain.
July 7, 2018 Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 8/10/2018 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 8/9/2018 9:17:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Brian's contest, Subimal - great stuff! Keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much. Greg.
Date: 8/7/2018 12:27:00 PM
You have captured the intense heat of summer so beautifully in this piece Subimal. Congratulations on your First Place win! : )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/8/2018 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Connie for your nice comments.
Date: 8/6/2018 3:47:00 PM
Such lovely imagery portrayed in your well-written Rispetto, Sibimal. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/7/2018 2:45:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 8/6/2018 3:23:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Subimal. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/7/2018 2:45:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 7/8/2018 12:51:00 PM
Nice artistic touch in composition. All the best.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/9/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for words of appreciation.
Date: 7/7/2018 9:16:00 AM
Subimal, a superb summer description. Best.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:52:00 AM
Thank you, Mohan for your visit and for lining the poem.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:53:00 AM
Subimal.. you write in ways that touch the soul!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thank you, Lyric for your appreciation.

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