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Summer Sun

Each day begins by growing bright while the horizon glows with light at sunrise. The mounting sun continues high and fills the new day's azure sky with sunbeams. Caressed by rays on flower beds, awakened buds lift sleepy heads to sunlight. Sometimes, mid-day, the parching heat is quenched when laden clouds secrete sunshowers. At last, at dusk, as night draws near the sun presents its glowing sphere at sunset. May 2, 2020 Contest: Compounding The Verse Sponsor: Joseph May Rules: The poem consists of five 3- line stanzas, for a total of 15 Lines. The last line of each stanza ends in a compound word, which all share a common stem word (I used the word "sun") The stem word must be used in the title. The syllable count is 8,8,3, with a rhyme scheme of aab, ccd, eef, ggh, iik

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Date: 6/19/2020 10:33:00 PM
What a unique form Sandra. The third line emphasizes the preceding couplet. A difficult write that you have accomplished beautifully.
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Date: 5/24/2020 1:04:00 PM
Another splendid write Sandra! You did a brilliant job with this challenging form! Congratulations on your win my friend! xxoo
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Date: 5/23/2020 7:31:00 PM
Wonderful write Sandra, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/23/2020 6:28:00 PM
This theme gives such beautiful imagery through your words. Congratulations on your win Sandra :)
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Date: 5/23/2020 3:08:00 PM
SO lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your win. Janice
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