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Summer Stream

Dragonfly lands atop the stick that stands in gently flowing stream.
Bubble trains and dried leaf boats blow
and briefly strand before they slip between the stepping stones 
then skip beyond, where quieter waters flow.

Speckled trout, dappled thrice, with sunshine spots,
just seen through mirror shimmered waters
swim between the Crowfoot’s tangled shocks 
waving to and fro to follow as the current’s go, 
white-adorned with flower pearls 
set bright in green and flowing locks.

Somewhere far, wood pigeon’s throaty coo, 
three longer, one double follow through, 
floats high along soft summer’s breeze, 
while flagging briefly, one by one, willow’s silver bellied leaves 
turn and turn to signal with the sun that all is as it should be. 
All is peace, and all is lazy summer’s eaze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 2:34 AM
Oh I absolutely love this one Bob! Such a picturesque muse that I can imagine myself wandering through the place and experiencing bliss. Congratulations on your win :)
Kimmerling Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 7:12 AM
So pleased you like it Aditi, and many thanks for your congrats. Summer stream is the second in a series following 'Summer.' I am hoping for inspiration for a third ..but right now theres a storm and its raining, so maybe it will have to wait!
Allison Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 12:51 PM
wow what superb imagery no wonder caren loved this so much:-) hugs jan xx
Kimmerling Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Jan. Appreciated. xxx
Agustin Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 9:40 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Kimmerling Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Hi Beata. Thanks for your kind words. Inspite of living in a London suburb there is a a Thames tributary not far with beautiful wilded walks that provided the inspiration. Congrats on your favourite scripture win. Beautiful truth. Blessings Bob
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