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Summer Solstice

The darkness falls draping the world in velvet shadow, as across Heaven, the shooting star sprinkles magic dust upon the sleeping dreamers. The winking stars aglow, she walks the path to the grassy hill, careful not to disturb the sleeping lovers that lie hidden in the tall grass, their glistening bodies naked in the early morning dew. Her diaphanous linen gown billows gently in the breath of morning, gleaming white in the light of the smiling honey moon hinting through the shear fabric at the beauty that lies beneath it. Following the path of planate vegetation where the heavy sun wheel rolled she spies the remains of the numerous cleansing fires that have since burned to cinder on the previous evening. As she crests the hill she twirls with rye smile and gentle laughter at the scene that lies before her, the fields fertile with seeds of plants and paramours to sprout anew as renewed life in the early spring. In her dance she lets slip her ethereal gown and slides slowly into the comforting bed of green with its life giving moisture, her body drawing in each drop from the tips of each tickling leaf. Contented with the promise of another year of renewal the mother of all life melts in to the warm earth to await anew the wonder of the next Lithan night. 06/01/16

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Date: 6/25/2016 3:14:00 PM
James, these words flowing from your pen are so magnificently magical! I am mesmerized! Just awesome, my friend! A-7. Pandita
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James Inman
Date: 7/8/2016 12:48:00 PM
Pandita, sorry I missed your beautiful comment. Thank you.
Date: 6/19/2016 3:46:00 PM
So very very beautiful !
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James Inman
Date: 6/19/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine.
Date: 6/12/2016 7:39:00 AM
Wow a very good summer solstice great words best I'v red xxx well done xx
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James Inman
Date: 6/12/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Wendy.
Date: 6/9/2016 11:28:00 PM
Nicely penned James
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James Inman
Date: 6/10/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 6/6/2016 11:11:00 PM
wow, it got very sensual about Mother nature. I really liked that last part. I see you did not enter it because it was not rhymed. It's too bad some of these contests do not allow free verse if they are going to allow any kind of rhyme since this is a very good one!! Did you see mine? Its picture could have gone well with your poem too!!
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James Inman
Date: 6/8/2016 8:51:00 AM
I did read yours Andrea, and your right, your image would go well with mine.
Date: 6/6/2016 4:55:00 PM
Swept up in your lovely imagery. Thank you! Steph
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James Inman
Date: 6/6/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment Stephanie.
Date: 6/6/2016 4:03:00 PM
was this written too late for the contest james - the imagery is so so wonderful it has a fairytale like quality to it:-) hugs jan xx7
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James Inman
Date: 6/6/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I started it for the contest but the contest required some type of rhyming form and the rhymes wouldn't come so I didn't enter it.

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