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Summer Solitude

Below my windowpane, I gaze at the old branches of the cherry blossom tree where the birds used to perch last spring. The tree branches~ now devoid of colours but still hold the twigs where buds and blooms used to cling. I open my window yet the cool breeze can't appease my thirsty skin. The leaden longing lingers like a melancholic melody~ from long ago. And as I see sparrows perching once again in that old branch~ I sigh a whisper, "You may not find me, but I hope this poem finds you". 21 August 2020 STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (25) ,any form,any theme Contest Judged: 8/21/2020 Sponsored by: Brian Strand Hon. Mention

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Date: 8/23/2020 9:30:00 AM
A longing...
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Date: 8/21/2020 10:08:00 AM
a lovely write, dear friend. God bless you with many more :)
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Date: 8/21/2020 6:25:00 AM
A lovely feel to this write...a bit of sadness too...
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Date: 8/21/2020 4:52:00 AM
Lovely poem laden in memory--I especially liked the ending.
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