Summer Sight

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Sun rising with all its passion over the horizon Summer golden shimmering shadows Define, sweet tones of yellow foxtail whiskers Raising their heads up high as if the world is theirs As they listen to the peaceful growing whispers Cool wind softly passes Sweet tones of yellow foxtail whiskers Shake and shiver Awaken against the fine emerald green shore Where seed heads burst and fluff Leaving behind the summer morning mist floor 5/12/2016

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/18/2016 12:06:00 AM

"... raising their heads up high as if the world is theirs." Now THAT'S a golden line right there ... both literally and figuratively. A fine piece of poetry, Eve, with lovely complimentary imagery ... hope your book ventures are going well. Must be very exciting for you :)

Eve Roper
Date: 5/18/2016 1:44:00 PM

Thank you so very much,Timothy, for your compliment. The book that I know of is doing well. I am stoked over it. Hugs Eve

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/13/2016 10:45:00 AM

love the foxtail whiskers..ohh, lovely wrire dear eve!..huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 5/18/2016 1:45:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Nette, for your compliment. Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/13/2016 7:32:00 AM

In words quite meaty/Sounds of near-infinity

Eve Roper
Date: 5/18/2016 1:46:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Probir, for your compliment :) Hugs Eve

Joseph May

Date: 5/12/2016 11:24:00 PM

Beautifully penned Eve...best wishes

Eve Roper
Date: 5/18/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Joseph, for your compliment. Hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/12/2016 8:02:00 PM

Eve! you have written with such IMAGERY to me!!I have spent time upstate NY and your verse has recreated delightful visions of my youth captured with more adoration thru vast fields of ripened, golden, glowing maize:) a sweet, solid ~7 for a lovely, artist...with peace, :), jill

Eve Roper
Date: 5/18/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Jill, for your inspirational compliment and the 7. Hugs Eve