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Summer Romance

Summer Blessing to the heart A reason to rise with cheer To follow the whim of the sun Loving the taste of lust and freedom It unfolds in all its splendor It follows its course Then there it is Gone AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on November 4, 2019 for contest METAPHOR OF LOVE sponsored by BOBBY MAY - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 11/16/2019 9:45:00 PM
The simplicity was exquisite in this. So much meaning in so few words. Love it. Lonna
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Date: 11/16/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lonna. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/14/2019 9:19:00 AM
Short but very sweet! I like this, Line--congrats on your win
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Date: 11/14/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, LJ.
Date: 11/13/2019 9:19:00 AM
I like the form you chose. It emphasizes the loss. Congrats!
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Date: 11/13/2019 9:47:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and observation, Juliet.
Date: 11/13/2019 4:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 6:13:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/12/2019 7:28:00 PM
nice penning Line, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 11/12/2019 8:01:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2019 7:15:00 PM
Line congratulations on your placement!;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2019 8:02:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2019 7:06:00 PM
Congratulation on your Placement! Line oh how I miss summer, lol
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Date: 11/12/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thanks for hosting this inspiring contest, Bobby. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/5/2019 10:30:00 AM
Line, I like this Summer poem. It's gone to a season sweet in memory now. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/5/2019 5:08:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.
Date: 11/4/2019 11:35:00 PM
Lovely and well written, I felt the passion and the separation.
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Date: 11/5/2019 5:09:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/4/2019 7:40:00 PM
Love the way this rises and falls, with the swell of the form and function/meaning inextricably intertwined. Nicely done, Line! ~ Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/4/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/4/2019 5:20:00 PM
Gone but not forgotten....just like summer. Lovely.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/4/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jean.
Date: 11/4/2019 11:50:00 AM
Summer & love go by so fast. Enjoy your day writing..........
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Date: 11/4/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Much appreciated.

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