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"The aim of art is to represent not the outward appearance of things (or feelings) but their inward significance" - Aristotle ~ Janie ... Janie Rose Bright fuchsia painted nails and toes I was but twelve, a boy ... she, sixteen and coy Summer mischief at camps on the lake Warm evenings after dinner, down to the shore I'd make "the call" - a youthful, visceral howl of promise ... and mystery Around the misty point it echoed and returned, but much sweeter (Like a callow phantom searching for straining hearts) Her teenage version of a nightingale that meant "meet at the tree house" Oh, how my bones trembled, exictement and apprehension coursing Inexperience and the unknown dancing like goblins Mocking me with anxiety, nearly paralyzing But I HAD to go ... something deep in my marrow burned A heat that pulled me, despite the horrid confusion and chaos inside At the lake's edge I would look up at the moon ... swoon "Watch over me", I'd say, dashing to the tree house up the road As I got close, I'd hear the radio - her favorite song requested each night "Why do stars suddenly appear ... every time you are near?" ... indeed When I reached the rope ladder, I'd take a deep breath ... And, shaking, aching, I'd climb ... slowly ... up To a secret, tender world of fear and fun ... and young love, undone ... The wonders, wild ... of Janie Rose. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "My Youth" Poetry Contest, Craig Cornish, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 12/19/2018 8:58:00 AM
Love this Greg! Thrilling read :))) xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 6:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen! :-) <3
Date: 12/16/2018 1:32:00 PM
Beautiful, mostly in an emotional way, Gregory, tackling the intense feelings of a boy on the verge of teenage years. Congratulations on your podium finish, my friend. ~ Wishing you all the best for the festive season! // paul
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2018 6:25:00 AM
Such a kind and beautiful comment, Paul, and I thank you so very much, my friend! Blessings! :-)
Date: 12/15/2018 3:46:00 PM
Such a beautiful memory of your first crush, perhaps? Lovingly penned, congratulations on your placement!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michelle ... yes, certainly a first crush, and a bit too early, as I was so confused by it, but all things happen for a reason, I believe. Blessings and thanks to you, my friend!
Date: 12/15/2018 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win in Craig's contest, Gregory! Sending wishes for holiday cheer to you, Carolyn
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2018 6:23:00 AM
And the same to you and yours, my friend - thanks and blessings to you! :-) <3
Date: 12/10/2018 9:24:00 AM
At such a young age, thoughts leading up to such a meeting can be very intense. You establish the period well with the Carpenter's song and lead us to believe Janie would compensate for his inexperience. Nicely done, Gregory. I think Craig will enjoy your entry.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/10/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Carolyn, I'm pleased you enjoyed it! It was the summer of 1970, and while it was a very confusing, exciting, frightening, wonderful time, I wouldn't change it for the world. Things, (ALL things), happen for a positive purpose, I believe, even the most troubling, and that summer ended up being a very important period of my life. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

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