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Summer Lovin

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on a sandy shore they made mad passionate love… beach baby conceived! 10-12-17

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Russell Sivey
Date: 10/13/2017 8:39:00 AM
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I bet the baby's name would be "Sonny", "Sunshine", or "Sandy"! That would be hilarious! Your write is a true inspiration to me! I loved your twist, and you have such a magnificent pull towards humor my friend, it's tremendous! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2017 1:42:00 PM
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Thanks Russell I do try and find humour in many aspects of my work:-) I definitely think Sandy would be the right name it suits a girl or boy lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 10/13/2017 1:34:00 AM
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Beach baby :) I wonder what the name will be.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2017 1:42:00 PM
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Thanks Darren, Sandy is the name it suits both sexes:-)hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/12/2017 8:06:00 PM
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Aw!! So cute. Where in the picture is the couple making love here? hahaha
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2017 1:43:00 PM
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BEHAVE - do you want to get me banned!!!! DON'T answer that one lol lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/12/2017 2:30:00 PM
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This brings back memories of a week in Hawaii...long long ago. Good one, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2017 1:43:00 PM
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TMI Lin!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2017 1:41:00 PM
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You have the Grease sound track playing in my mind now...lol...I hope born into love
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2017 1:44:00 PM
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I was listening to it on the radio!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/12/2017 1:30:00 PM
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Hi Allison: SAND IS A TALISMAN!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2017 1:45:00 PM
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Oh is it Ralph!:-) I better not tell hubby ... we live 5 mins from the beach lol:-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/12/2017 1:07:00 PM
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Not a good idea to make love in the sand, I'm just sayin' :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2017 1:45:00 PM
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lol thanks for the advice John!:-) hugs jan xx
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/12/2017 9:08:00 AM
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Lol cute! :) xomo!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2017 12:24:00 PM
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Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/12/2017 8:38:00 AM
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I B scorched! huggsiedoodles ~ j
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2017 8:46:00 AM
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lol cheers John I just thought the ending was funny:-) hugs jan xx

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