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Summer Loves

When gazing 'cross love's glistening expanse,

               The magic of those June thru August moons ...

       Was bound to weave the warmest of romance -

                      Its beams, the dreamy silk of summer swoons.



Those sizzling weeks were somehow rarefied,

               With breath that stirred a longing deep within,

       And carried angels, blessed, but just this side

                      Of being much too chaste and sweet for sin.



Oh brief, the winsome balm of summer days,

               Yet briefer are the courtships that they bind -

       Those magic spring-tide sparks, so set ablaze,

                      Burn hot-but-faster, in the hearts they find.



Tho' all those summer flings will find us old,

                      The embers warm us ... as our days grow cold.







~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Summer Love Sonnet" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "May 2018 Standard Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Memories Of May" Poetry Contest, Michelle Faulkner, Sponsor.
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Canerdy Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 1:31 PM
So beautiful, Greg! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Barden Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:05 PM
Thank you so very much, Janice - that's very kind! :-) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 9:11 PM
I love the way you ended this Greg. Congratulations on your deserving third place win! : ) xxoo
Barden Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Connie, You are so sweet to me. Blessings! :-) <3
Faulkner Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Another amazing poem, Gregory, congratulations on your placement!
Barden Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Thank you so very much, Michelle, I so greatly appreciate my wonderful placement! Please forgive me, I could have sworn I had done thank you's on this ... I'm getting OLD, lol. Blessings! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Congrats on your top win, Gregory.
Barden Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 5:36 AM
Thank you, Line.
Gaul Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Lovely swooning rhyme. Another well-crafted verse. Congratulations.
Barden Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Greg, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, Friend! :-)
Gentry Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Awesome. Congratulations on your win.
Barden Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! :-) <3
Ashley Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Congratulations, Gregory, on your excellent win with your beautiful sonnet. Such amazing imagery; ‘Its beams, the dreamy silk of summer swoons.’ - incredibly luscious! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Barden Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 7:46 PM
You are always so kind and leave such wonderfully heartfelt comments, Susan, that I am very thankful for! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Hamilton Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 8:53 PM
So beautiful Greg, I always see your name at the top, you really know what I like! I love this one!
Barden Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Thank you so much, John, I greatly appreciate my placement ... blessings!
George   Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Beautiful love sonnet,Gregory. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Barden Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 7:44 PM
That's so kind of you, Elaine - many thanks and blessings to you, Friend! :-) <3
Warrior Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Congrats! my friend...well executed...love and light...^WW^
Barden Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Many kind thanks, ^WW^, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :-)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Splendidly said.
Barden Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Thank you so much, Sian! :-) <3
Sands Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Excellent Sonnet Greg! Good luck in the contest :)
Barden Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Many kind thanks, Heidi - blessings! :-) <3
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