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When gazing 'cross love's glistening expanse, The magic of those June thru August moons ... Was bound to weave the warmest of romance - Its beams, the dreamy silk of summer swoons. Those sizzling weeks were somehow rarefied, With breath that stirred a longing deep within, And carried angels, blessed, but just this side Of being much too chaste and sweet for sin. Oh brief, the winsome balm of summer days, Yet briefer are the courtships that they bind - Those magic spring-tide sparks, so set ablaze, Burn hot-but-faster, in the hearts they find. Tho' all those summer flings will find us old, The embers warm us ... as our days grow cold. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Summer Love Sonnet" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "May 2018 Standard Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Memories Of May" Poetry Contest, Michelle Faulkner, Sponsor.

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Date: 5/9/2019 1:31:00 PM
So beautiful, Greg! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/15/2019 11:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Janice - that's very kind! :-) <3
Date: 5/8/2019 9:11:00 PM
I love the way you ended this Greg. Congratulations on your deserving third place win! : ) xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/15/2019 11:03:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Connie, You are so sweet to me. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 5/8/2019 3:52:00 PM
Another amazing poem, Gregory, congratulations on your placement!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/15/2019 11:03:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Michelle, I so greatly appreciate my wonderful placement! Please forgive me, I could have sworn I had done thank you's on this ... I'm getting OLD, lol. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 5/19/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 5/19/2018 3:12:00 PM
Lovely swooning rhyme. Another well-crafted verse. Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/19/2018 7:47:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Greg, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, Friend! :-)
Date: 5/19/2018 5:44:00 AM
Awesome. Congratulations on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/19/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! :-) <3
Date: 5/17/2018 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Gregory, on your excellent win with your beautiful sonnet. Such amazing imagery; ‘Its beams, the dreamy silk of summer swoons.’ - incredibly luscious! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/19/2018 7:46:00 PM
You are always so kind and leave such wonderfully heartfelt comments, Susan, that I am very thankful for! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 5/17/2018 8:53:00 PM
So beautiful Greg, I always see your name at the top, you really know what I like! I love this one!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/19/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, I greatly appreciate my placement ... blessings!
Date: 5/17/2018 7:34:00 PM
Beautiful love sonnet,Gregory. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/19/2018 7:44:00 PM
That's so kind of you, Elaine - many thanks and blessings to you, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 5/17/2018 4:12:00 PM
Congrats! my friend...well executed...love and light...^WW^
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/19/2018 7:44:00 PM
Many kind thanks, ^WW^, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :-)
Date: 5/16/2018 5:28:00 PM
Splendidly said.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 8:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sian! :-) <3
Date: 5/16/2018 7:36:00 AM
Excellent Sonnet Greg! Good luck in the contest :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 8:51:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Heidi - blessings! :-) <3

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