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Summer Goodbyes

Emerald shall turn medallion- 
             crimson blades fall, zephyr breeze slows; 
the end of summer warmth is near- 
    FAREWELL to the cherry blossoms, 
for it’s time to embrace Autumn. 
                 Willows shall weep, yet mums bloom, and
 the SUMMER heat shall be no more. 

Nette Onclaud
September 6, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 9/12/2019 11:54:00 PM
It was a nice touch to weave the contest words into the poem, Lu Loo. Congratulation on your win.
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Date: 9/12/2019 5:07:00 PM
you did a beautiful job of this, Lu Loo. Congrats for the win
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:44:00 PM
- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, L.L :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:04:00 PM
i really like the pensive and articulate way you penned this summer song, lou... best of congrats with thanks for being part of my contest... huggs
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Date: 9/12/2019 5:37:00 AM
Laura and again I'm here to congratulate you on a well deserved win!;)
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:20:00 AM
Your imagery made me smile, because it is well done and so gorgeously done!
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Date: 9/6/2019 6:27:00 PM
this is heart is always heavy when summer leaves...autumn makes me think its brilliant colors are like the grand finale of summer before winter turns everything this one though my captured the beauty within your words...:) hugs
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Date: 9/6/2019 10:05:00 AM
Beautifully done and I am with you, I am about done with this heat for another year. Best wishes in the contest
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