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Hot Summer sun scorches The breath still Morning wave Buries its hate In scratching grass-sounds Floating yellow Line of sight bends In brain-sensed tease Echoes Empty canyons fall Beyond stillness Caution winds silent spirals, Soaring distance -- unswerving sight Melted minutes Sultry stares Torrid tease

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Date: 8/11/2022 5:05:00 PM
I love your poem! Everything described so vividly. I know that feeling when it's almost too hot to breathe!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 8/11/2022 7:22:00 PM
You are so right. Sometimes it feels too hot for anything. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.
Date: 8/10/2022 2:23:00 AM
You sure portray the feeling in this splendid poetry, Andy...
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Andy Chunn
Date: 8/11/2022 7:22:00 PM
I was having a hot time I guess. Thanks for you support.
Date: 8/5/2022 11:07:00 PM
Your imagery is so sharp and clear, especially like 'scratching grass sounds' and 'melted minutes' - that feels like summer to me~
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Andy Chunn
Date: 8/11/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. This summer seems more extreme than most.
Date: 8/5/2022 2:27:00 PM
you sure got across that summery feeling here Great job!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 8/11/2022 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Andrea....best to you.

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