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Summer Farewell

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Filtered through the dew kissed trellis, and faded rose, sublime, southern breeze stirs cooler days, with the news of autumn’s climb... Summer hints a strain of adieu, sung from rusty windchimes ....................................................................................................................................... In honor of Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest: "Triplet"

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Date: 8/16/2011 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:36:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your sweet success in this contest with fantastic words luv..
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Carrie
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Date: 8/13/2011 9:34:00 PM
Very nice imagery ...liked it.Best wishes in the contest Carrie.
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Date: 8/13/2011 8:56:00 PM
Yeah, the rain's taken a toll on the windchimes. Is nice to read about cooler air, will be coupla more months 'fore we feel it here!
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:31:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Carrie
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:39:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed this magnificent poem! I love the form you used! Great descriptions! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:26:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve here in the still hot south..Good luck in the contest...Sara
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