Summer Days - the Triolet Style

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~Summer Days~ (Triolet) Summer season brings us very hot weather But the days cools again when it depart Hear birds, see butterflies, flowers, heather Summer season brings us very hot weather There is fun, beach, lots of sun altogether We see sunshine very bright for most part Summer season brings us very hot weather But the days cools again when it depart. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2013 July.31.2016 ~Author's Notes: The " Triolet" is a poetic form or style consisting of only 8 lines. This "Triolet" has been written this time using ten syllables lines,( The English style) instead, of the usual eight syllables ( The French style) which I usually write with or use more in the past.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/31/2016 11:21:00 PM

Ah yes, it brings the cool and summer re-blossoms another day.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 8/1/2016 11:07:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, M. L. Kiser ,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D