Jenna Logan Poet Dodoitsu

Sultry Autumn Wind

Autumn teased red maple leaves
with draughts of flirtatious wind
Naked, the tree stood barren
Clothing, swept away



September 30th 2020  
Writing Challenge ~ Dodoitsu
Sponsored by Constance La France

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Constance La France October 5, 2020 at 7:46 AM Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 1:23 PM Stopping back by to say Congrats! Jenna. Linda

Jan Allison October 4, 2020 at 1:01 PM dropping back with my congrats Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2020 at 11:37 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin October 2, 2020 at 6:52 PM A wonderful poem, love the flirtatious element and sans clothes, clever!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 6:49 AM - Autumn artwork ... beautifully described, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 4:57 PM Thanks for your kind words, Anne-Lise.

John Gondolf October 2, 2020 at 6:07 AM Autumn is upon us and the chilling wind leaves us feeling bare. Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs. Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 4:56 PM Thanks so much for your wishes, John.

Regina Mcintosh October 1, 2020 at 3:27 AM I love this. It's a delightful, lovely and intriguing piece of poetry that flows beautifully. Love to you and blessings too Jenna Logan October 1, 2020 at 4:51 PM Thank you for your kind thoughts, Regina.

Tom Cunningham September 30, 2020 at 11:54 PM I can feel the chill wind and see the tree with no shame lol. Good luck Tom Jenna Logan October 1, 2020 at 4:50 PM Thanks so very much, Tom.

Mark Koplin September 30, 2020 at 3:30 PM That poor tree lost its nickers for the winter. brrrr. Jenna Logan September 30, 2020 at 4:41 PM Knickers and every thing else! haha Thank you, Mark.

Linda Alice Fowler September 30, 2020 at 3:27 PM What a tease-exposed! Good one, Linda Jenna Logan September 30, 2020 at 4:40 PM A tease of a breeze. lol Thanks, Linda.

Jan Allison September 30, 2020 at 12:34 PM you certainly made it a sultry season indeed Jenna!:-) hugs jan xx Jenna Logan September 30, 2020 at 4:40 PM It didn't start out that way, but then along came that flirty breeze...Thanks, Jan.