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I lie here on this beach where the sand is a treat – like warm dessert beneath my feet! I lift my sand-covered feet from the ground. The white grains drift between my sugar toes. Sept. 10, 2020 for Eve Roper's ' Double Tetractys 2' Poetry Contest Picture #2

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Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/21/2020 5:29:00 AM

A poétic view of a Warn moment\! salute alkas

Carol Mitra

Date: 9/17/2020 10:22:00 PM

Wow....yummy way of putting it....Congrats dear Andrea much love:)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/17/2020 8:39:00 PM

I can feel the sand, the warmth and the sand sifting though my toes with your oh so vivd pictures! Congratulations on your fist place win. Love sharing the podium my firiend!

John Watt

Date: 9/17/2020 8:20:00 PM

You've got a new nickname, Sugar Toes! Congrats on your first place, ST

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/17/2020 7:40:00 PM

Congratulation, Andrea, on your 1st Place Win!!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2020 6:55:00 PM

Andrea, you hook me in, "sugar toes", .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2020 11:35:00 AM

love the imagery here

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/15/2020 11:33:00 AM

Definitely happy toes...caressed by sugary white sand..Nice imagery

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/14/2020 4:59:00 PM

Just out of interest Petal, Which kind of dessert do you enjoy dipping your tootsies in lol, great spacing and a treat to read. Take care, Richard

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/15/2020 3:25:00 PM

SAND pudding, of course!

John Watt

Date: 9/14/2020 4:23:00 PM

Any reader of this can tell how much you love summer. "Like warm dessert beneath my feet", what a great description of the image. Best wishes in the contest.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 9/13/2020 10:03:00 PM

I feel the pleasant experience.Nice work !

Paul Callus

Date: 9/12/2020 3:48:00 PM

I've been wanting to come read this one, Andrea, but you didn't post it straight away. Your take is somewhat different from mine, but I like it. Some people go mad on sugar, you know... :) Regards // paul