Suffering Season

Ralph Waldo Emerson: “A woodland walk, a quest for river-grapes, a mocking thrush, a wild rose or rock-living columbine, salve my worst wounds.”

SUFFERING SEASON

broken…
the sediment — a deposition seed,
of what meaning, this scrawl?

splinters splayed, suffering season
comforted by a columbine.

pressed into the carnivorous cranny
of melancholic chords, phantom phenom
appears from sunless shadows,
felicitous with numb heartstrings.

pretense of petals pierced,
potent poison’d creative mind.

woman in white, welded to hatchery,
sings wisdom and solitude —
shy flower cranes its head to listen.

rebirth croons in crannied space,
cramps of convalescence released.

a lonely boy. . . the florid dove lands
on two fingers, he’s mesmerized —
the apparition strokes his hair.

2/21/2020
Flower in the Crannied Wall Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 3/14/2020 6:27:00 PM
Wowzers! The only thing better than the alliteration is the deceptively well-measured free meter. I imagine you’re a devotee of the Late, but Immortal, Mary Oliver. Lots of lovely similarities in your use of symmetry and asymmetry of pattern. Congratulations on making top 10!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2020 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so much! I have read Mary Oliver...a nice compliment :)
Date: 3/14/2020 5:35:00 PM
An excellent poem Kim, congrats. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2020 6:30:00 PM
Thanks, Gary!
Date: 3/12/2020 7:46:00 AM
i just love this, it's one of my personal favourites on the winners' list; the alliteration is excellent and i love the title..i've always thought you are a very talented writer - congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2020 6:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, sweet poet!
Date: 3/11/2020 8:01:00 AM
The columbine love the cracks! Mine all moved out of the garden to take up the cracks in the pavement up against the house. Love this :))) Congrats on your win! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2020 8:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen! :)
Date: 3/9/2020 4:44:00 PM
Kim, such a creative take on Craig's theme! Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2020 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 2/22/2020 10:44:00 PM
I think you have a terrific chance at getting another podium win with this one!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2020 7:59:00 PM
Yay! Thank you for encouragement, dear sweet friend!
Date: 2/21/2020 8:51:00 PM
I think you delivered the type of poetry Craig was looking for when he made this contest, kim. Very creative imagery. Wish I could think up something like this. but alas, this is one I will probably skip!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2020 9:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, sweet lady! Hugs and xx
Date: 2/21/2020 1:33:00 PM
As soon as I read "columbine" I was hoping this was for Craig's contest. This is so good. My best to you in the contest! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2020 6:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen! xx
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