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Sucking All the Mist Away

As the Cliff Swallow Flies the sky In the disguise Of sun reflected cloud The mist silently rises To meet him in the air As the two greet. commune Their forms gradually combine Being changed slowly The Swallow disappears Phatom like into the blue Sucking all the mist away

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John Loving Iii

Date: 8/7/2010 2:54:00 PM

and then rose fingered dawn appears. john

It's Doada Albritton

Date: 8/7/2010 2:27:00 PM

i dont knowhow to write u oter than like this... i dont really think about it to much unless i get depressed or something like that...but its kinda hrd to loose somebody that ur that close to..... and as far as an uncle or granfather, no i dont...there is no one that could take my dads place....

Vrushani Thaker

Date: 8/7/2010 7:13:00 AM

great work!!!!!!! Great expression!!!! Vrushani

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2010 7:04:00 AM

Very nice use of imagery -- seems somewhat surreal. Wouldn't it be great if we could all be a force for change and, like the swallow, take the "mist away." Good work, Sara. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/7/2010 7:03:00 AM

Great picture you give the reader here.. very enjoyed, Always Michael