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Oceans of time are heavily travelled waterways, though lives are spent fast. souls swim in desperation, towards sinking shores. Many succumb to Chairon’s generous lift and never complete what they began; they are as fish to the bated hook. Some wash to shore, uncertain whether they will survive to achieve their goals. Others know that their time is the present; they simply will not be defeated. The thing is, who will be drowned first, by the over achiever? Finishing is not always the best; it’s how you go about it, that makes the swim worthwhile. Yacht’s have plenty of room, for sharing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 6:50:00 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/27/2015 9:28:00 AM
Thanks so much, Funom, for your wonderful comments. I am happy that you enjoyed this piece.

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