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It crept up on me, but I didn't mind. No one was to blame, so calm and sublime. I had a firm conviction, that far behind. Still in sync: never gives credit or rhyme. Old trees are covered in a layer of frost. owing to the trembling of their leaves. Reach from echoes, arms bare prize was lost. Little Robin profoundly inwardly,  grieves Lost spirits, wandering the ages in despair. Aimlessly heading down into the darkness. In hopes of eluding the suffering and care. Were staring but went on mute sharpness. My full range of speech and mind is so sublime. Might not bring you fairness with logic or rhyme.
Written: April 09, 2023

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Date: 4/11/2023 4:03:00 PM
Certainly nothing wrong with the rhyme or the logic, Sotto. Thats just how it works:)
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Date: 4/10/2023 12:29:00 PM
Love this write, Lasaad! Old trees are covered in a layer of frost. (Nearly says forest so plays with the eyes and the mind). Grabs my heart…the little robin profoundly inwardly grieving! And the final two lines! Some great writing!
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Date: 4/10/2023 3:22:00 AM
- A deep poem ... marked by sadness, Las ... excellently written :) - hugs
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