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S e r e n e in my meditation- Spiritual is this aching Shadows whisper inspiration Surrendering- I am waking Stillness wraps me like a dark cloak Soft mother's hand is a sweet stroke- S t a i n i n g my imagination __________________________ June 4, 2018 Poetry/Verse/Pleiades/Sublime Copyright Protected, ID 1029-536-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Written for the contest, Pleiades sponsor, Joseph May First Place

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Date: 6/24/2018 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Pleiades! Well done.
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Date: 6/24/2018 11:01:00 AM
Nice one Constance! congratulations on your win. Mick
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Date: 6/24/2018 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Constance, beautifully written Pleiades. :))
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 6/23/2018 12:03:00 AM
Peace and happiness with the mild hues of sadness ... wonderful ...Congratulations ...
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Date: 6/22/2018 7:41:00 PM
EXCELLENT, Constance. CONGATS! Janice
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Date: 6/22/2018 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful write BW, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/22/2018 4:17:00 PM
wow, this is utterly gorgeous, Constance. a very well deserved TOP win!! Congratulations.
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:49:00 PM
The sadnes in the last two lines...
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Date: 6/5/2018 7:56:00 AM
I beautiful, peaceful poem. Constance, I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck. John
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Date: 6/5/2018 5:44:00 AM
And peaceful too...Nice write
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:20:00 AM
This is indeed a sublime poem, Constance.
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Date: 6/4/2018 10:22:00 PM
Breathtaking, Broken Wings, in warmth and beauty. An intensely captivating and superb poem. Warmest wishes and good luck in the contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/4/2018 10:11:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Broken Wings, luck in the contest,,, Hugs Eve
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