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Copyright Protected, ID 05-1546-620-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written May 11, 2023
For the Standard contest, Haiku Sonnet
sponsor, Joanna Daniel, Judged 06/12/2023

Second Place

Free Nature Summer photo and picture

the path is tangled it twists through the green forest ~ warm dappled sunshine in the ancient trees the hidden birds twitter songs ~ baby birds in nests beneath the gnarled limbs grow chaotic wildflowers ~ hues of the rainbow the stillness is deep it wraps the forest in warmth ~ lush vines cling and twine there is a beauty sublime ~ a perfect moment in time !

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Date: 6/14/2023 2:04:00 AM
Wonderful series of Haikus totalling a beautiful poem, congratulations
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Constance La France
Date: 6/14/2023 3:51:00 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulation !
Date: 6/13/2023 3:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, Constance - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2023 6:32:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and hugs !
Date: 6/13/2023 1:29:00 AM
Beautiful and splendid imagery, Constance, congratulations:)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2023 6:32:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 5/12/2023 9:27:00 PM
Beautiful haiku series on Nature. The scenes described are exhilarating and soothing ! All the Best in the contest dear Constance
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Date: 5/13/2023 1:35:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement !
Date: 5/12/2023 8:10:00 AM
This is a nice poem.I enjoy reading it.
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Date: 5/13/2023 1:35:00 PM
Christine, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !

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