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Subdued, In Writing

Enveloped in waves of overflowing thought to drown within its current light goes dim, cannot see what is in front what is behind I? For in a trap, cannot focus cannot breath. Gasping crying to what cannot hear. It has ensnared, in its icy teeth. Thought oppressed ink splattered statements along piles of morose. Cold as he froze the final essence of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/30/2018 12:25:00 PM
Your note is very true and your poem flows wonderfully. Stay strong Sydney ;)
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Date: 1/28/2018 11:54:00 PM
Your writing is beautiful Sydney, and don't let anyone tell you differently. I have written a few poems on Child bullying, perhaps you would like to read them when you get a chance....Starry Starry Night and Hallelujah. Welcome to Poetry Soup....Maria
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Date: 1/25/2018 6:30:00 PM
Hi Sydney I think many can relate to your lines and poets notes. In the past I've been bullied, criticised and put down over my poetry style but I won't let these people let me down and I definitely wont give up having such fun writing:-) I see you are new on the site and extend a warm welcome to soup :-) hugs Jan xx
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