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Take a little time to wander around your room and look at the accumulated stuff you own Is it a living room, or mausoleum, tomb? Or each thing reminders of memories you've known? Bite Size Poem no12 Poetry Contest: Placed 4th Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Date wrote: 05-July-2021

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Date: 7/15/2021 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 7/15/2021 4:13:00 AM
Beautiful. congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/15/2021 4:29:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/8/2021 8:58:00 AM
If you read my poem Each small ornament reminds me of you, you will have your answer.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/9/2021 12:48:00 AM
I read your poem, loved it, thank you for the visit.
Date: 7/7/2021 7:51:00 PM
A superb quatrain. Stuff chokes my life - I can relate. Best wishes, Brian
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/8/2021 12:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, I appreciate your comments.
Date: 7/7/2021 6:34:00 PM
Terry, this is a very clever quatrain, with the mausoleum metaphor. Well done.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/8/2021 12:51:00 AM
The mind as a mausoleum, thank you for your kind comment.

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